When your gone im hurt, When your gone im in pain.
Seems to me this time your gone for good,
If you were to come back hungry I would not offer you any food.
Seems that your heart is a wreck, and now it made mine a mess.
When your gone a burden is lifted off my shouldiers,but a pain is sunk in my soul.
When your gone my heart is broken, but I dont feel alone.
Everyone says your wrong, and this I do believe.
But for once in your life you chose him instead of me,
now your stuck with him in our house.
He's hearing the words "I love you" coming out of your untruthful mouth.
He's hurting now instead of me, im just sitting back and wondering.
Whats wrong when your gone? Why cant I just be me?
Cause when your gone , Dammit Im Free.
No more pain, no more hurt, no more questions about where your at, and no more pain from figuring out your lies.
Now there is no reason to cry,my stomach hurts and so does my heart.
But someday that pain will stop, for you broke me in my time of need.
Whats wrong when your gone , nothing I see, You can be you and I can be me. I can hurt for awhile till I find that someone new, You will hurt for a lifetime knowing im the one you abused
Author notes
heart break all the poems about love in my set are about this girl that just plowed my heart into the ground. for the guy who hurts her everytime they get together
Written July 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
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Comments
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I really liked the theme in this. You captured it so well. Very nice flow as well. And saying you are free when that person is gone is so true. Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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Nice poem I liked it your a great writer you do a great job on these poems. again thanks for entering and good luck.
Always,
Brat


