why won't you listen
why can't you see
the girl that's crying
inside of me
her heart is broken
her soul is torn
she's tired of fighting
she's weak and worn
you hear her calling
you know her name
you turn your back
full of shame
she's reaching out
she needs you now
but you don't care
you don't know how
why can't you realize
all that pain
all that suffering
bears your name
if you would listen
you would know
she's given up
now let her go
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Written July 28th, 2005
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In bondage we all feel this way, Backs are turned, yet still stabbing. I liked this poem, It's full of raw emotion, and it's Got a nice flow. Things get better in time. This poem is a tear in ones heart.
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i truthfully am saying.. i dont understand. but what i got from this, for me, was a fight between myself. and some things that im trying to give up are only still there becuz im not letting go. and i feel like im giving up lately... but really im just letting go. i dont know. im mainly stuck on those last 2 lines. it hit me deep. awesome write though brit. i havent talked to you in forever and I havent read one of ur poems in even longer. I love you! <3 kidd.
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Wow.. that was awesome. I hate when people say they relate so I'm not going to but I do think a lot of people will atleast partially understand where you're at. I like the poem a lot and I think you did an awesome job! Keep em comin!
Jenn -
WONDERFUL POEM
This was a wonderful poem. So sad and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure to read. Take care. God Bless.
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This was a very pretty..but sad poem!! I like it alot! Looks like to me you put alot of work in to it!! Keep up the GREAT work!!
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