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beautiful

beaten
    no words now i speak
betrayed
    no promises to keep
bruised
    the pain won't go away
broken
    the scars will always stay
beautiful

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Written July 28th, 2005

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  • Remaining000
    August 4, 2005
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    you are beautiful... no matter the bruises, the past, the brokeness or the scars. No matter how small we are compared to those things. Nothing! is bigger than our God. keep your head up and your heart strong. never lose faith. <3 kidd.


  • josh-13
    August 4, 2005
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    the scars will always fade, Beauty is in the heart, life is a healing process. The pain will go away if you let it.