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Forming her Outer Barrier

That girl was short,
Fat, didn't know what she wanted,
Insecure, Daddy's girl,
innocence radiated from her eyes,
easily fell in love...

Then she met
the world, got her heart broken again,
said, "Srew you all."
Time and time again,
Kept her love in tact...

Then people said,
"See, look at her hardened eyes,
They can look into your soul,
see the hate from deep inside,"
They missed the sparkle there...

Then she looked
in the mirror, and cried to sleep,
put a hole in the wall,
her anger free from herself,
Then she saw his face...

That girl was cold,
bitter, knew right from wrong,
pain burned, Daddy's Girl,
innocence radiated from her eyes,
'cause she was still in love,
From When She Easily Fell in Love...

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Written July 28th, 2005

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  • addicted2nyquil
    November 21, 2005
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    hey sissy, omg, i never even knew you wrote this poem!!!! You should come on here more often, g2g, bybye.


  • justin d-
    July 28, 2005
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    How sad. i hate love. ANd hope i never feel that emotion to anyone but God, and all my wodnerful friends. But, there will never be another love of my life.

  • SilverWhispers
    July 28, 2005
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    I like how this is written. And it's sort of strange because I have a friend who is recovering from the same emotions that you wrote about. You should definitely keep writing because you seem to be able to catch common emotions that people go through at least one time during their lives. Good job.