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Soul and Heart

If i gave you my hardened soul,
would you welcome it so affectionatly,
with a thousand deep kisses from your lips?
would you embrace it rather firmly,
as you clutch wrapped your palm around it?
or would you squeeze it so tenderly,
as you hold it against your chest?

well, if you say i've got soul,
quite unlike any other,
then you must surely know that means,
that you've got the heart to match.

so maybe if i gave you the chance,
you'd open the very depths of your heart,
to this hardened soul of mine...
i think you would find much happiness,
letting my soul frolick so freely there,
within your heart's tight embrace,
until my soul couldn't help,
but fill the warmth of your heart,
by spewing forth it's special kind of love.

of course, after sharing it's love so,
i doubt my soul could remain so hardened for long...

Author notes

the real meaning of this one isn't entirely overt, and so you might have to be a hermaphrodite to fully get this piece without any explination...
Written July 28th, 2005

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  • Bigmammajen
    July 28, 2005
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    spewing forth its special kind of love...

    now thats an interesting image