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a hole

my countance is very low.
I have only me to love.
I've been betrayed,laughed at,wrongly accussed.
I don,t know why?cause I love so much.
What's wrong with me.
I'm good,I don't do negative stuff.
but you accuse me!
cause i wear my heart on my sleeve!
It gets crushed everyday.
My two children are my only loves!
I have a big family brothers and sisters.
but I am by myself!
Ill keep my own head up!
for my children's sake!
maybe ill find my way to enlightment!

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Written July 28th, 2005

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