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Bottled Tears

Bottling the tears I cry
Never knowing why
What drove you to these lies?
Can't you see the pain in my eyes?

Shattered dreams and fantasies
You never really wanted me
My eyes are open and now I see
The truth has set me free

You never were anything you claim
To you it was just a game
One in which you hold no shame
One in which you accept no blame

Lie after lie, you continue to play
Not one sorry do you say
For your soul I will pray
And hope that your game ends someday

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Written July 28th, 2005

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  • heart on sleeve
    December 7, 2005
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    almost tragic in it's message though proving your heart to be good as you still pray for him, men are often so cruel and your emotion is spoken well with your simpleness well done lol abigailxx


  • Brandy3 gold member
    August 8, 2005
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    This poem shows through your words such a loss for you but nothing lost on his side,for all he knew how to do was play with someone elses feelings,but one day it will bite him on the a--.Your poem shows the strenght you have to express it here at the site,Keep going.
    Brandy3

  • Lotus Flower
    July 28, 2005
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    How sad, written very well. Flowed well too! Great Job!