Because of you.

I wanted to die, but i couldn't do it, because of you...

Every time I cut myself, i felt guilty, only because you didn't want me to.

I wake up each day, dreading whats to come, but i face it because of you.

When i hated something, I kept at it, because of you.

I cry myself to sleep, but dream only good dreams, because of you.

I pretend to be happy, though i'm dying inside....

Because of you.

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Thank-you.
Written July 28th, 2005

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im retired
January 22, 2006
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this is amazing. because it is very well written and presented. i also really liked it because i found it so personal. "I wanted to die, but i couldn't do it, because of you... Every time I cut myself, i felt guilty, only because you didn't want me to." this was a great start because its something i can relate to, almost exactly [therefore making me read the rest]. the message this piece conveys hits extremely close to my heart. very nice job.

and thank you for your comment on Crush Her. i will work on enhacing my characters' depth
Hitsuzen
January 17, 2006
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Yay, thinkingness.

Thanx for commenting.

FREE CAKE!

† The Lonely Girl. †
pinkspork93
January 17, 2006
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That's really nice, I loved it! Your story seemed so real. So deep, and true...It makes me think. You have made me think. Congrats.
Hitsuzen
August 12, 2005
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Thanx, it started out real, than i added my imagination 2 it, so it wouldn't just end..
the 1st line is more than true though.... *shrug*

thenx 4 commenting.

~Dust and Ashes~
brokenpoet
August 12, 2005
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awww htis is so sweet and so loving. it's wonderful that you have someone like this in your life.

May you always be happy and become happier with each passing day,

Melissa
partychic20000
July 28, 2005
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That was cute
good work