Don't tell me it is not possible,
Don't tell me it is not real.
I know what I know, see what I see,
And I believe what I choose.
When I see you, when I feel you,
I know this is right, it is real.
No one can change that,
Especially not us.
Don't listen to the world,
Only our world matters here.
Don't walk away because of words,
Words are not as strong as us.
Let me hold you close,
Let us go forth and show them
What love really means
And what differences are not.
Author notes
Another brain fart, sorry. But its something. I'm trying to wake my muse up. Obviously it isn't going so well! LOL!
Written July 28th, 2005
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Your muse seems to be just fine to me! I don't think your muse ever sleeps!
Love and hugs, Patricia ♥
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This poem hits me hard. I wish everyone could see love and relationships in this view. It's so hard to find people who will love you and want to be with you no matter what is said or done. But their are also way to many influenced by what others say and think. They get so caught up in these rediculious notions and forget what really matters.
great write!
x Jen -
awww... this is an awesome poem!!! I really like this one!!! You did a great job!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
This is a poem that takes the heart for a ride into the joyess pleasures of your emotions of love and its very powerful alot of the images stand out strongly very beautiful and written brilliantly...
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good work
this is a pretty good poem and a nice form to it I like it
good work
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I really like this, it definately hits home. It seems to say to me it's these two people against the world, forgetting what everybody else thinks of them and just doing what they have to do for themselves, you know? Haha sorry I'm rambling! (which is a good thing because it means this poem got to me) Anyway great write, I'll look out for more of your stuff,
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Well I believe my Muse is comatose...have any smelling salts?
anywho...
For a dormant Muse I would have to say this is purrty good
It has that lovely whistful and hopeless romantic feel of being completely absorbed and lost in someone... own private world...
yes quite nice
Awesome write really and I think I am about to resort to bribing my Muse....
Best wishes and good luck
-G
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