That green and gold that I've never seen
the 2 of them make me think of the hatred I've seen.
Get over what happened so many years ago,
I love you still please don't let me go.
Take over these walls that remind me of how being in love makes me sick,
I'll attempt to pretend your friends weren't bunnys.
I love you so much that it's like a disease but it's one I'll keep,
Because loving you is like dropping of the steepest cliff and falling into your heart like our old beat up jeep.
I love you with all my heart that it's been making me sick.
Green and Gold never looked so good the way they do in your eyes
but because i love you so much it's making me sick.
Please stop being such a bunny and listen to me and give me a chance because all i want is one last dance.
I love you so much it's making me sick.
Author notes
I attempted at following the guidelines of this contest. but i failed miserably...
Written July 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love in Variation by TheDrip.
370 points, ended August 1, 2005, 5 entries
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Okay, I can judge this contest based on the fact that you did do follow the rules for one option (making "I love you so much it makes me sick" appear four times) but I can't judge this completely because the title does not follow the rules.
A simple edit will fix this.
"What Color Were Your First Love's Eyes?"
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oo ooops i thought that i had to do 2.. oops. hahah well hopefully i win i want to win alot.
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Well you did more than one option, which is kinda tough. If you'd like, you can go back and edit this if you don't like it, or send in something new. Just pick one option and you should have an easier time
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