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held

second night in a row
craving one thing
needing one thing
not getting it
and way too afraid to ask for it

scared to ask you
too lazy to call you up

no one is in the house
and no one has called
no one has stopped by
no one even knows I'm here

All I want is to go out
have some fun
stay out late
invite you over
and be held.

yes I just want to be held
held so tightly I can feel the air escaping your lungs
held so tightly I can feel your heart beat
held so tightly I know I'm loved.

cause lately when no one is home
I just want to be held
and when I was out with you
I dreamt of just being held

Author notes

I've been home alone for a while and are just craving some affection. Had to vent
Written July 27th, 2005

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  • choke-on-the-truth
    August 4, 2005
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    very blunt. but something every girl in the world wants!!!! lol. the very beginning of it reminded me of trying to break an addiction to drugs. (the 2nd night in a row craving one thing part) . but yeah great job