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Little Cutter Girl

Little cutter girl
why do you cry
little cutter girl
why cant you sleep well tonight

Little cutter girl
why can't you see
little cutter girl
why must this be

Little cutter girl
why are you filled with such fright
little cutter girl
why can't you do whats right

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Written July 27th, 2005

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  • B0n3z
    August 30, 2005
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    hmmm i seen this one before!!! haha i think like a while ago!! haha any hoo good write!
    ~>BRIT<~

  • bleedingarms
    July 30, 2005
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    Lol... thanks so much and thanks for the applause! take care


  • Exploit Stereotypes
    July 29, 2005
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    Oh my fucking god! That was awesome! I love it! mad clapping

  • Aly-Girl
    July 28, 2005
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    gj

    very good poem.. i think that with a few more lines in it it would be a lot more emotional...but its very good...and i can relate a lot..i used to be a cutting maniac...but ive stopped..the pains still there but no new scars are added..anywayz...very good.

  • bleedingarms
    July 28, 2005
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    thanks everyone! take care


  • down without you
    July 28, 2005
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    nice write. simple but it works really well... really good poem, very sad though, the last verse is especially good... keep it up. xdwyx


  • BabyLove
    July 27, 2005
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    wow i like it i find myself askin my self these questions all the flipin time i hate it good write tho!


  • SixtySevenMustang
    July 27, 2005
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    its cool, kind of... repition... but cool all the same.

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