3 A.M., wide awake, her eyes you can not see
instead what's there is that blank stare
her thoughts she can not flee
Time creeps by as she sits alone, this day much like the rest
Of all the things she holds inside, fears what she knows the best
What scares her is knowing life will never get better, It'll always stay the same
Until the day she finds her hope, her addiction she'll never tame
As each hour passes, her body grows weak
As she does what she knows, what she knows is to tweak
Author notes
This is the first thing I have written in a very long time to say the least. Things have been really fucked up. I would really appreciate it if you could read and leave a comment.
Written July 27th, 2005
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aww darling i hope thingsget better.. i dont know if u still remember me but next time u come on u should really update me... i have been wondering how u have been doing.. this piece was great like always with u babe! i agree that addiction is the hardest to quit... i know we both know this... well keep ur head up and good luck with things.. i hope to hear from u soon..
Yours,
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Wow. That's sad. Is this a personal experience? If so...damn...sorry. That's one of the worst things to be addicted to. Hardest to quit anyways. Good luck!!
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wow....this was great. What is the addiction though?
I suffer from an addiction. but i dont even want to stop. its weird. Anyway back to the important stuff. I really liked this poem. I think im going to go read more of yours to refresh my mind of you..lol. well anyway...great write...keep it up! -Ebi- <3 -
This is sad and a good description of what addition can do to someones thinking. You have written this well and expressed the words to convey this message. I hope the subject in this write gets help and that all will be well. Great job on this and thank you for sharing it.
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What scares her is knowing life will never get better, It'll always stay the same
Until the day she finds her hope, her addiction she'll never tame
that made me think of my cutting addiction that i'm trying very desperately to quit... it's been like 21 days now that i haven't cut which is fucking great for me... but every day seems to pass by so slowly and the one thing that i feel could help me feel better because of everything that's going wrong of course is cutting...
i feel lost right now.. but i suppose in the end, it will all turn out as it should... great write. -
Things only get better when you work really hard to make them so ... life is hard and full of woe, my sister ... make it better for yourself ... and keep writing great stuff like this ... it helps to chase the demons away (sometimes)
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I really enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing
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