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When No One Else Cared

When No One Else Cared
You were there for me
When I was hurt that he left me
You sat there beside me

When No One Else Cared
About how much he hurt me
You were the only one that could see
That I was still hurting

When No One Else Cared
You called me at night
Stayed up with me the whole time
Held me close so I would have nothing to fear

When I felt abandoned
You knew how to help me
You told me I love you
He didn't deserve you

Thanks for being the one that Cared
Thanks for being my very best friend
Megan, you're great
You've always been there for me
I just hope I can do the same for you



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For my very best friend who has helped me through everything I've gone through
Written July 27th, 2005

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  • LovedByTheOne
    July 29, 2005
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    Amazing

    this is great. it reminds me of my best friend who has helped me get over my ex. tonya, my best friend, has told me that i deserve someone better than him. that God has picked someone perfect for me and that when i find him, that i'll know that it's him. well anyways...this is a great write. keep up the awesome writing.


  • Kuragari91
    July 27, 2005
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    Aww! I wish I had a best friend like that, but I think I do. Great poem!


  • Shannon62875
    July 27, 2005
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    great job sounds like shes a really great friend to you.. im sorry about the guy.. he doesnt deserve u if hes a jerk like that remember his loss not yours!! GREAT WRITE keep it up!!! shannon