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Help yourself

This addiction is getting to be more than I can take,
Because these needles get to me good.
And I dropped myself outside your house,
It didn't matter because I couldn't feel the rain.
All I have is the blood on my hands,
And to question if this is really pain.
Now I have to roll down my sleeves,
I don't know what I will say when they ask about the scars.

My bones are eating away at my skin,
It's like there is nothing to me anymore.
And to think I could hide this from you all,
But my eyes are always to sore.
I couldn't see what I was doing to myself,
I missed the feeling that I always felt.
Now I have to confess,
I was running out of excuses for my scars.

To weak to say anything I fell to the floor,
This room became a nightmare but still I wanted more.
I can't shake this off I wanted one more shot,
And the feeling, the feeling of death is exactly what I got.

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Written July 27th, 2005

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  • NemesisEngine
    September 22, 2005
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    dude.. sad poem.. sounds like heroin.. my cousin had it, and i see exactly what i saw with him in this. scary good.


  • Sunless
    August 9, 2005
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    Edited on Aug 25, 3:46 p.m. because 'yt'.

  • holt
    July 27, 2005
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    this is really good, i don't know how else to describe it. it is truly amazing. i can feel all of your pain.
    if you ever need to talk, even though you don't know me, just im me.
    trish