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Puertorican honey

my puertorican Love
comes from far away...

A full blooded Rican has his own sexi ways..

mi Amour he calls me.. I call him papi..

He's my little puertorican honey..

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Written July 26th, 2005

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  • eccentric
    June 4, 2006
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    sexy
    short
    makes me hot
    how about you honey?
    =D good write


  • La Dama del Ayer
    July 27, 2005
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    short but hey who the f@#k care, I loved it
    I can see u in love and well u went right to the poin, your love 4 your puertorican honey, tu papi chulo^-^
    !!!nice write!!!
    keep the latin pride goin
    and el amour 2-tee hee