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Behind the door.

Behind the door in my mind,
I see my life,
flashing before my eyes.

I see opportunity,
and I see my fate.

Love and happiness lay behind that door,
and the hope that I will live a long life.

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Written July 26th, 2005

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  • sarahblu
    August 18, 2005
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    oh please expand on this one. tell us whats in your mind. I was disappointed that I didn't get to see into you. After all, I went "Behind the door in my mind,"


  • Sonja
    August 13, 2005
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    Nice short poem, full of hope and future joy.


  • Piscean soul
    August 2, 2005
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    Awwwwwwwww. I loved the image very much. Short but beautiful. Keep up the good work. I like it.


  • Vickie J
    July 31, 2005
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    I liked how you related this to the door in your mind and what you see for yourself in the future. Sounds good


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 29, 2005
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    This is really good. To be so short it says so very much. Don't we wish we knew exactly what all lies behind the doors of our lives? I don't know maybe we are better off not knowing! Anyway, great write here and the flow was real smooth as well

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