The other day,
I woak up.....
The other day,
I ate Cheerios.....
The other day,
I pissed my pants....
My piss was purple,
though I don't know why.
It ran down my leg,
and it was very warm.
It dripped onto the floor,
and made a purple puddle.
I stared at it in awe,
and it began to warp.
A figure rose from the piss.....
it was a purple piss pony.
It jumped around,
and made little noises through it's small purple nose.
The wind blew,
and then my purple piss pony was gone.
Tears ran down my face....
I was mourning my little pony.
It was blue,
though I don't know why.
That day was the best of my life,
I'll miss you little purple piss pony.
Author notes
twinz are so hot......sorry poem lady....forgot.
Written July 26th, 2005
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Okay... this was certainly different from anything else I have ever read so I guess you certainly have the market on originality here!
Good luck in the contest! 
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~~~Touchof1der~~~
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This is a VERY interestinly StRanGe piece! Almost psycodelic - seeiming to resemble a trip down the ol' rabbit hole... Hmmm...I'm still pondering this one...
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Nice job!!!
Strange but still a nice job here. I love the horses in the border. Good luck and keep writing.
Joyce (sunny day)
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lol that was very odd. o.O
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nice work........laugh my ass off....hmm thats kinda uhh intresting....looks like u didnt read all the rules lol nice tho make sure u fix that x0x0x0 -emily
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