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When God Made You

~Baby~
when God made you, he made a wonder.
He didn't make Lightnin'
without the Thunder.
He made all Beauty
that men should see.
When God made you, He was
Thinkin' 'bout me.

~Baby~
When God made me, He made me
just for you.
He didn't make the Sun without
the Moon.
When God made me, He was
Thinkin' 'bout you.

~Baby~
We Two will be come one,
For everyone to see.

Because...
When God made you, He was
Thinkin' 'bout me.

Yvonne J. Griffin
12/24/02

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Written December 24th, 2002

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  • PoetryGirl26
    October 26, 2003
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    aww very sweet, i liked this little write, isn't it great when you find your soulmate...your true soulmate...it's beautiful!


  • Immortality
    June 2, 2003
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    Aww!!... That's cute, you have some great poetry.
    That was wonderful how you ended the poem,
    Keep it up.

    *!$%$!*Kati*!$%$!*


  • Rubee
    December 31, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    ohhh this is so sweet Yvonne!!! It's a beautiful feeling to know there's someone special out there just for you, one complimenting the other, just as the sun and moon compliment each other... a beautiful write!!! :)

  • -Dawn-
    December 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I just love this Yvonne...there was a nice peaceful flow to it and your voice was strong

    lovely write girl

    ~~Dawn