You’re like the sun
You’re the light in my dark life
But we just push each other away
We keep building up this wall between us
The bigger the wall gets the darker my life gets
But we just keep adding more bricks
Keep filling in the holes
With this sealant of sadness
I hope some day soon we will break down this wall
And stop my slow death
This darkness is covering me
The light is almost gone
There it goes … there you go
I lost you forever
And lost myself as well
Damned to wander the darkness forever
In this shadow cast in the total eclipse of my heart
Author notes
Written July 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- Gotta Love The 80's by Whispering Winds.
400 points, ended August 6, 2005, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awesome
very good. i loved the title also. It's very creative and you have a lot of talent. great write -
wow very heart felt excellent job you wrote this very well your write was diffently worth the read excellent
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Wowie at the title. The title is excellent, and the write is worth a read. Very well written and well presented also!
Keep writing!
Ankita -
This is very well written. The background goes well with the song and the poem. Thanks for entering this in my contest. Excellent job.
Best of luck to you.
Tammy
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