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Loving Storms - Sonnet #29

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The front porch beckons me to spend some time,
The thickly padded chairs are soft and cool.
As storms roll in there is no doubt that I’m
The one who’ll bear the brunt of ridicule.

 

For many think this love of thunder’s roll,
And light’nings flash in darkened daytime sky
Is somehow a perversion of my soul,
But makes me ask the simple question – why?

 

Why should a love of storms be somehow strange?
A lack of fear of thunder’s booming roar.
It’s something that I have no need to change
And therefore something that I will ignore.

 

So, sitting on the porch in pouring rain
Is something I enjoy I can’t explain.

Author notes

Have always loved storms - some people just can't understand that.  Still love them though.
Written July 25th, 2005

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  • Purrsanthema
    August 19

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    Oh I love this one! And tonight here it's too hot and muggy and could well use a storm. I love watching them sometimes even more than fireworks! Your poem describes that feeling so wonderfully! I love the tone of voice that ripples comfortably through it!


  • mesmerize me
    July 28, 2005
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    This is beautiful.I also love storms,they help to put me to sleep on restless nights.I even have a cd that plays the sounds of a storm.Very good poem.Keep up the good work.


  • Claireabelle-
    July 26, 2005
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    This is awesome! I love storms! They are the best! Great write!


  • SexyAngel0418
    July 26, 2005
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    LOL... This is great grampa!!! I definately understand your love for storms... I love them!!! I really understand how you feel in this poem too!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • SimpleSarcasm
    July 26, 2005
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    Excellent

    Love it. I completely agree I love watching storms roll in. I love the coolness it brings and the excitment. This is a wonderful sonnet. One day I will attempt one.

    Great write.

    ~Dee


  • SuZyCuE
    July 26, 2005
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    Grat poem about one of my Favorite subjects. I have always been fasinated by storms, from watching them form in the sky on a hot summer day, to sitting like you on the porch watching the beautiful fireworks Mother Nature has given us. Wonderful poem Paul


  • Touchof1der silver member
    July 26, 2005
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    I can understand perfectly!! I love to watch the flashes as they charge across the sky and listen to the thundrous roar as thunder rolls through the air and the rain... the sound of the drops pelting the ground or any other surface in its path... to me... it's all music to my ears and tantallizing tease to my senses. I like walking in the rain too. (I'll bet you would have guessed that without my telling you. ) The saddest part is when the rain is just a soft, barely there mist. The most that happens is the rain stains the soil in silence. This is beautiful Paul and with your words you have awakened one of my own pleasures.
    ♥ Kimberly
    Edited on Jul 26 because 'One of these days I'll get this spelling thing perfected!'.


  • SilverInk
    July 25, 2005
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    Trust me, I understand. I adore storms, completely. Anyways, nice sonnet, those are tough to do and you pulled it of well. Good write.

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