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Alone Again

Alone again
In this dark hole I call my own
my home
How is it everything I love
Leaves me when I need it most
How is it the one I love
Could hate me so damn much?
I'm so sick and tired of tears
I'm so tired of being afraid
I can't help but feel my grip is too loose
All the loves I've known are slipping away
Away, away from me
They never look back
They sometimes laugh
Though I'm tired of crying
I can't help but yearn to shed...just one tear...
For I think I've finally lost
the ones I hold so dear

Author notes

Not really the best sounding one, just really needed to express my thoughts.
Written July 25th, 2005

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  • Crying Soul
    May 5, 2006
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    It sucks when you cant count on the people you love
    But what can you do? I can so relate to this poem. You sorta keep asking yourself why? why why why?!
    I've been there.But the best thing you can do is let it go and move on. What else can you do? If you don't move on you will be in the same place asking yourself the same question. But anywho very nice poem! Keep it up!


  • silverael
    August 11, 2005
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    Sometimes it's very disturbing how you echo my emotions so perfectly, but I suppose that's why I keep coming back. Perhaps it's not what you usually expect from your own poetry, but I think I appreciate it for its emotional value and my ability to relate to it. - Liz