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Rain,Thunder,Lightning...remind me....

rain rain
falling falling
once it hits the ground its nothing

shattered

It reminds me of us
We are cold and weak
and fall from the sky
then when we finally fall
we

shatter...

Boom BOOM!
Thunder in our midst

Reminds me of our Fathers scolding us
And we are scared so we hide from it

Flash Flash!
Lighting glitters across the night sky

Remind me of you when all is dark you shine through me
no matter what i do...

Author notes

I LVOE YOU CARSON PLEASE COME HOME!!!!
Written July 25th, 2005

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  • Xx Thorn xX
    August 1, 2005
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    Thanks for commenting !
    ~Madi~


  • CountryLullaby
    July 25, 2005
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    this is so sweet! i loved this!!!! it had so much feeling!!it was a great poem!

    ~*CASEY*~