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Liar!!!

You fuckin' dickhead,
how dare you lie to me.

You son of a bitch,
you were using me all along.

You little piece of shit,
don't you dare come near me.

I'll fuckin' kill you,
how DARE you try to say sorry.

It's WAY too late for apologies,
you're a fuckin' bastard!

You used me,
you uncaring prick.

I'm gonna forget you,
and the fact that we fucked.

That's all you wanted in the first place,
you little faggot.

Goodbye Adam,
and go fuck yourself.


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Written July 25th, 2005

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  • lonelyblacksoul
    August 31, 2005
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    Outspoken

    Sure wish I could write a poem like that would write one about my ex who does not know how to be a father that sure was good


  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 19, 2005
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    WoW! Somebody sure crossed your boundaries and trampled on your toes. It's never pleasant to discover the one you thought so much about was nothing like you believed them to be. Lots of heat here! Good luck in the contest.
    ♥ Kimberly

  • Wierdone4eva
    July 26, 2005
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    Thanks Tammy for caring. You're always there to help me. You're kind, thanks. i'm glad you like my poem. Yeah, it feels terrible to be lied to. But i'll get over that asshole.

    ~Clara~


  • amykat
    July 25, 2005
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    Wickedly Sweeet

    i likey!!! u n me r goen thru the same shyt...Bravo!!!...its just the last line shud be either Ernie, Gonzo, er Robert...lmao...anyways i love this piece...~much <3~Amy~


  • Whispering Winds
    July 25, 2005
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    WOW!!!

    Its good to vent, and i can see that this is very personal to you. I am sorry this happened to you, i know for sure you dont deserve it. He is just trash, and even if you are alone, you are better off...he dont deserve your loving heart...
    Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
    Tammy

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