To know that you deceived me so,
made me feel such a fool.
To know you were there, there with her.
made me feel so low.
I wanted to tear your heart out
as soon as I seen you kiss.
A moment of intimacy, that should have been us.
had filled my heart with doubt.
So we went our separate ways,
and you know you're still in my heart.
The only thing i remember
is those savaged days.
Pretending I loved you,
just to see you smile.
When I awoke next to you
the pain seeped through and through.
It took six months of hatred
for me to finally say.
I cant stand you my love,
I saw you that fate-less day.
You turned around and laughed,
to convince me otherwise.
Do you think I'm that stupid
You split my heart in half.
I smiled and said 'well darling,
you useless sack of shit,
get out of my bed and get out of my life,
that's it I've bloody had it.'
As you walked out my life I could do no more than cry
for years after it, all I wanted to do was die.
Now I feel stronger because I know you were a prick
now I'm living my life without you to make me sick.
I want you to know that I do not hate you,
I only pity you now
For I know you will never have me back,
no matter what you do.
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This is basically what happened to me a few years ago, its made me stronger 
I've read Veil of Silence by AngelEyes711 for the contest. Thought it was great, you should read it!!!
Written July 25th, 2005
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very awsome write very emotional. It made me remember my days with my x. I hope you will learn from this if you havnt already. good luck in the contest
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I like your poem and she hates him she doesn't pitty him cause why should she even thought he is the one that lost her.I likes your poem.Nice Job!
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great! absolutely wonderful poem. thankyou for entering..♥weetbix
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this is awesome......you should keep up the good work.....ill aplaud it
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wow this is awesome! i really like this, so much anger in here. this is great for the contest! good luck!
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hey there very good poem, well written and thought out, the rhyming structure was a little haphazard but it was still good. to be eligible for the contest i need you to comment on at least one other poem in the contest and inform me of it by replying to this comment
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Nicely portrayed. Liked the style you chose and the imagery. I was able to follow the emotion you felt in each stanza, keep up the good work!
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sweet! yeah some things in life happen just to make us have some more backbone. lol. i can relate to this type of situation well. great write! XD
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