Only you are the last I see before sleep,
the first to see when I wake.
Only for you is my love truly deep,
for forever tomorrow's sake.
Only one thing I know to be real
and as sure as the air I breathe,
as deep as the love for you I feel
but as a silence mocking reprieve.
Lonely are the destined dreams of the past
with all those forgotten tears,
Memories simply disregarded, off-cast,
as I do laugh in the face of my fear.
My darling dear, my dearest love,
I promise to be forever true
You are my angel torn from high above,
and forever I belong to you.
Despair for loss
but fear no more.
As the wind breaths down my neck.
As tomorrow opens the door
while destiny deals her deck.
I love you now, and forever more
as only you I choose to see,
through sleep and dreams and open doors
you're all I wish to be
Author notes
Written July 25th, 2005
A contest entry
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Gold trophy winner
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Very nice write. Good job, and good luck!
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I have read your verse
Thank you so much for submitting your words to my contest
I will comment in detail on my final selections
I wish you well in the contest
Thank you
Rick
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Sadly written although i found it to be a beautiful work.
Great job
and
Goodluck
~Lisa~
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very nice and sad too. wish to you good luck
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*cries*
This poem is beautiful! Thank you so much, I like to see the emotions that people put into their poems (hence for this contest) and you have portayed so much emotion, thank you for your entry, and good luck!
All the best,
*Stephi*
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That is a beautiful poem. Good luck in my contest!
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It is clear that u have a lot of emotions for this person, and ur poem eloquently presents them. great write. gd luck. x
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WOW!! this is an awesome write! I love it.... you expressed you emotions very well... I love the way you put it all together! I can tell your love for him will never fade and you did a great job expressing that nice and clear! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!!
Shannon*Leah -
very good
congratulations on a wonderfull write and a well earned trophy, a very emotional and thought provoking write,thank you for sharing this with us. -
Very nicely written, a nice way to describe someone special in your life.
Thank you for entering the contest.
Always,
Terri Norris -
God! This is beautiful! I absolutely loved this! This part reminds me of my little someone..
"My darling dear, my dearest love,
I promise to be forever true
You are my angel torn from high above,
and forever I belong to you."
It's just fantastic, I wish I could say I'd written it! Good luck in the contest! Love Aimee x
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very beautiful i use to feel like this about someone and then i realized it was too good to be true and woke up alone, but anyway great poem
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