Alone is a common word.
It's always used without thought.
but only the experienced
really know how it feels inside.
deep down i'm not alone;
i have friends and family,
i just have no-one to share
my everyday life and love with.
Is that what "alone" really means?
In the past i've got close to people,
but i always panic and push them away.
it never fails to stop happening.
just like waking up everyday.
it could be because it never happened early.
i've always been too independant.
then, when i'm nearly there,
i'm right back to where i started.
everyday and everywhere is a struggle;
i'm reminded of my failure everywhere;
couples holding hands, sharing memories,
there's just no getting away from it.
one day it "should" happen to me,
and there'll be no going back.
But until then, i'll stay envious.
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Written July 25th, 2005
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Hey I really like this I know how you feel. keep up the good work!
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thanks a lot for commenting.really appreciated. sorry you feel like this too, i know how much it sucks
hope you're okay.
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nice write, "i've always been too independant.
then, when i'm nearly there,
i'm right back to where i started." i can relate to those lines.....unfortunately that's how i feel sometimes....keep writing
near falling
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aww thanks a lot for your comment
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AWESOME! That one really hit me! My favorite part was "It's always used without thought.
but only the experienced
really know how it feels inside." That part hit me hard. lol Nice job! Keep up the good work! -
aww thanks for commenting
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thanks
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aww thanks a lot
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Great poem! this poem is just like me, and how i'm feeling. how i push people away from me, cus i don't want to get hurt.
this piece is very imaginative and emotional. good job!
luv pmatilda
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love da poem...nice job...the emotions expressed are good ones...i like it...keep it up...=D...
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Wow, I can understand this poem so well. It's like a life story in a way. Amazing Job!!!
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