i can't keep going on this way
its all i ever hear you say is
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
I'm still choking on the news
and things won't ever be the same
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
i refuse to answer you
cause you can't hear me anyway
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
you may think that I'm insane
i don't care I'll take the blame
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
i just want to be alone
is that to much for you to take?
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
i want to look you in the eye
and scream it in your face
no!
I'm not okay!
do i look like I'm okay?
Author notes
ur arm could fall off and they wuld ask u if ur okay,
wut do they want u to say?
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Written July 25th, 2005
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this is the one u told me about on the phone i think
i love it
cause its like seriously look at me?? are you retarted??
hehe i cant exactly get the right words out..but i think i understand the message
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i miss ya to hun, and at the time i'm good/bad
my minds screwed up!i call u to night!and IM u on here!ilusfm!
~raven -
i loved it babe.... as you know i feel ur pain here.... btw ru ok? j/k,plus if im not u might eat me
missin u like hell,
amy
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ha1ha! v. funny!thanx for the comment
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Are you ok?
Lol. Sorry, im joking!!! This is an amazing write I can totally relate to this! Keep it up!! I absolutely loved the form!
One love,
Kitty xx -
i'm not sure if i should thank YOU,about the last 7 words of ur comment,or if i should thank GOD!
lol! jk!jk! thank dude!
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raven.. this is such a deep poem.... i dont even know where to start
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yea, it's the truth. my parents don't even notice how unhappy i am. i know it sucks but we move on. anyway, awesome write. keep writing!
<3 always,
megan -
hi raven! you`d never find out who this is.......so i`m going to tell u.......................stephanie.............i like your writting................it`s ok..............
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wow... i love this poem... very good... i love it... i said that already... but i do love it... keep writing...
bexa -
aww that was really cute i love this poem raven so sry about the 7th but i cant make it im so sry wish i could
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i love this poem raven, its so true. sorry i havent called u in awhile i lost the paper i wrote ure number on!
<3 Heather -
out standing!
wow...just makes me realize how much ppl can act around there emotions and i can't fuking spell! lol -
This is verrrry good.. i like how you repeat the
are you going to be okay?
are you sure you feel okay?
and then answer it at the end like 'oh yer of couuurse i am'
i see what you mean, after a while it gets annoying.
very good write, keep smiling and remember that you are you god bless x x
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why r u little?
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COOLI
Hehe, My Chemical Romance, IM NOT OOOOOKAAAY. Funny. xD
i want to you in the eye
and scream it in your face
Guessing you missed out a word or something, xD I Love the last part..
From your little sis,
Diva ~
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aww this was sooo good! I know exactly how you feel, I think everyone can relate to this! I hate when I say I'm ok because it usually always means I'm not. Just one tinny mistake possibly, I'm not sure if this reads right:
"i want to you in the eye"
Second stanza from the bottom. Anyways, it's a great poem, I loved it and I love the repeate and all of it, great job! -
love you
.. but, you've left out a word in the second last stanza hun .. awesome write as always 
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i'm really sry to hear that!if you need to talk i'm here!thanx tho*gives her a sad smile*
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AGH! okay so thi is how i feel exactly right now with my mother becus grar.. .. both my grndparents died on the one weekend just recently and my mother is like: are you okay? i'd say yes becus i hav to be bewcus everyoned else is bein so depressed and then she ges are you SURE you're okay and then yeah! i'm just like: everything you sed.. like what do u expect and yeah.. i just.. hmm really related, i loved iot oxoxo
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thanx man
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i love it.. sometimes there isn't an answer you can give to make others feel like your really okay. it doesn't matter anyways.. if ur not ok, there's nothing they could do about it, know what i mean? anyways i <3 it.. great job!!
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