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Choices (Cinquain)





Knowledge,
Experience
Gained through making choices
Garners what guides us through our lives:
Wisdom.




Author notes

Written for the contest 'Wisdom- tell me what it is' by Faithful Dreamer

Received no placing and no acknowledgement.  I will check the contest closer next time.

Written July 25th, 2005

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  • Dee Dreamer
    August 16, 2005
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    this poem is beautiful!it tells like a little story or something! great poem!!!
    if i had one word to describe this poem, i would say: Fantastic!

    bye
    Dee Dreamer


  • Elrenia
    August 15, 2005
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    We could hope. Thank you for reading and commenting.


  • Crowheart
    August 15, 2005
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    oh if only wisdom was as easy as this rolls off the tongue!
    beautiful!


  • wishintreeUK
    July 26, 2005
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    This is an excellent cinquain, well done!

    |Katie|


  • glispa
    July 25, 2005
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    harnesses well . all thats needed - good luck

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