Rain pours down, mixing with my tears
Mourning for your love, wishing you were here
Paths of faded moonlight, lead me to your grave
If only I said goodbye, before you slipped away
Taken from this world, by death's secure embrace
I long for you again, to see your precious face
Reasons for your passing still obscure my mind
Incapable of washing away the stains you left behind
Take this pain away from me
Break these chains and set me free
from this world of endless sorrow
darkened hearts and black tomorrows
Your love was my life, and I never
thought I'd have to say goodbye forever
Author notes
RIP B.J.R. 1942-2004.....i know the ending doesnt fit the rhythm of the rest of the poem but who cares....
Written July 25th, 2005
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Wow,
This is a really powerful piece you have written.
I really really enjoy it.
I'm sorry for the loss.
Tiffany
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thank you!
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wow! wonderful poem...well written...
~Moiraine~
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how sad! lol ur goin make me cry! (jk) but it was awsome like always! -shantel-
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thanks!
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wow, awesome poem! very deep and very strong. yea, it sucks when people die. i hope B.J.R. rests in peace. keep writing!
<3 always,
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lol thanks Ash...much appreciated
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RIP B.J.R.,even though i dont know who this person is,im SSSOOO sorry >
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yes very true....thank you Rachel
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wonderful poem JD...it sux when people die huh? but you get used to it...life goes on and it feels like only you mourn the loss....
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your welcome. (do you think you could return the favor?)
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thank you!
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l0vE it!
oh my gosh this is B e a u t i f u l.
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thanks! appreciate it!
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wow.......this is strong.......wow.......i love this poem tis very very VERY good i love the part where u siad "Take this pain away from me
Break these chains and set me free
from this world of endless sorrow
darkened hearts and black tomorrows" that was a very good line also when u said "I long for you again, to see your precious face
Reasons for your passing still obscure my mind
Incapable of washing away the stains you left behind" love it!!!!!!!!!!! great write
love,
Bran
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