shattered glass falls by my face
as i lay on the concrete floor
blood flows from the open wounds
i wish there were more
I'm not accepted anymore
i have nowhere to go
i have been disowned
my pride has been taken
and all the love i once felt
i have changed so much but for what
what is it you long for me to be
i cry for your love
for an answer to my prayers
but i receive no salvation
i stopped the fights
the drink and also the words
i even stopped loving you
but i couldn't do it anymore
i begged and i pleaded
but you didn't care
it was as if there was a hollowness in your heart
nobody listens
nobody cares
nobody knows who i am
not even you
so now you leave me no choice
i don't want anyone Else's love
and i couldn't bare to see you be loved
so I'm getting out I'm being a coward
and I'm giving my life away
to be looked at by the people
to be eaten by the earth
and most of all
to once again be loved by you
love eternally
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Written July 24th, 2005
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What such deep poetry. It speaks to my soul. I can feel your
passion and pain in every word. You write awesome work!!!
Keep writing for your talents is unlimited. -
There is so much pain here which often takes courage to express. The black on purple is a little difficult to read
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How vividly disturbing. How sad and tragic this write is. You have captured the chilling emotion in this piece. great job on this and thank you for sharing it.
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I liked this, and the emotion you displayed. I cant really describe how much I liked this and I can relate in my own way. I wish you the best. Keep on writing.
Blessed be,
Lefay -
This is a very nice poem. I especially liked this..."i stopped the fights
the drink and also the words
i even stopped loving you"...I felt that one in the pit of my stomach.
Also loved the style in which you presented this. Awesome!
Bestest wishes and all that other mushy, gushy stuff
~Meli~
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this is so depected on the way many people feel these days. ill have to admitt i feel this way an aweful lot. crazy how people feel so alone yet others feel the same way. so guess your not alone on this one . lol.great one .
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Very good. Wanting and not wanting, from the same person. Very good at letting your ions through, great write and good luck.
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Forever hurting...good write
Such deep passion etched into each word...craving yet wishing to be away from that which you once had...but also somehow wanting it deeply.
good emotion...strong feeling
Keep it up
Still thinking of you..
~Heather
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