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infallible murmur

insides snowing their beauty
 no's reduced to drops
 framed by chain reactions
  aimlessly woven at as
   latencies spoke via
    light's life corner
     inhabited by present tenses - fulfilled
      by the sonnet of another un-solitude
       legally spraying dance steps
        equally forgotten at times

integrity shower like friendship blooms
 north of colors' inhaling places
 tenors applaud with their middle branches
  eagerly speaking, a word too unknown
   gerunds flying a mind crash
    risking its name like a fabled tiara -
     i've been a wave and the ocean swallowed my sand,
      to see you've been the sky to swallow the shells
       yogurt grins of acceptance in midnight confusion.

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allpoetry.com/poets/InfallibleIntegrity

(Update: his link is now allpoetry.com/chaotic%20peace )

This is for Kevin.
I talk to some people on AP, appreciate several as writers, others appreciate me. But you're the only one on AP whom I actually got to know and whom I call a friend. I'm sorry I don't get a chance to do this for all my friends, on AP or not...
(Now just DON'T ask what I meant by this poem...)
Written July 24th, 2005

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  • lively banter
    July 19, 2008
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    hmm now write a chaotic peace one


    • Dienush
      July 19, 2008
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      haha, maybe someday. I do like this name a lot better than the infallible one though

  • Dienush
    September 24, 2006
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    Thank you, Serena. Yeah... he did appreciate it back then...


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    September 23, 2006
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    I love reading dedications to other people. I won't ask what you meant for it seems rambled but that isn't a bad thing. I am sure he appreciates it.

  • Dienush
    July 27, 2005
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    Thanks for your sweet comment.


  • Always Deena
    July 27, 2005
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    Thank you so much Diana,for sharing this with me,I hope Kevin realizes the gift he has in you. This is beautiful. Thank you for entering.
    Deena

  • blueeyestexas
    July 26, 2005
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    AW!!!!!!!! Yay!!

    Love, K

  • wesinator
    July 25, 2005
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    excellent

    wow.. diana you have excelled your self yet again... I have read a few of your poems now and am finding myself enjoying you more with each new one you create


  • lively banter
    July 25, 2005
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    I am so shocked and filled with great happiness at the same time! This is just sooooooo sweet of you. I feel loved , Thank you so much. This poem is just so beautiful, I love it.


  • tieed
    July 25, 2005
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    Go Kevin! Hehe.
    Great poem! I really liked the last lines, it made me smile. I'm sure Kevin really apperciates this, you're a talented poet and very good friend. I can see why he likes to do so many collabs with you!

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