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Big Brown House

The smell of apple and grass
Dances in the dewy air
A big brown house towers over me
The smallest girl in the world – and that’s okay.

   Adventure lurking behind every musty panel
   Exploring an attic of mystery
Finding old soapboxes. In pink and white –
A nostalgic princess

Shaving cream bubble baths
And hugs of grandpa’s cologne
Blue eyed cats and sheepdogs
--I still know their names.


        Wavy blonde baby
       Dressed in polka dots
        Striped shorts
       And bare feet

My first bike ride
    In the driveway
On a rainy day belonging to July
  - It was almost my birthday.

Grandma was in the kitchen
Making blackberry pie - Daddy’s favorite
I took my place by grandpa
And listened to baseball talk between the guys


    Summer nights
    Full of melted slugs
    And starry skies
    Snapdragons and butterflies.

Safe in a memory
Where I'm eldest at 8 or 9
kept alive
in a big brown house.

-Teresa- 7-23-05

Author notes

Life changes, but you hold on to dear memories forever.

There probably isnt too much in this poem that will make sense to anyone but me... but thats okay... just a poem of memory in a way. i lost my grandpa a few months ago - i was thinking of him today.
Written July 24th, 2005

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