a grain of sand
in the hands of time
lost within the hour glass
a lifetime
in a split second
gone
memories of times
lost and forgotten
only the soul can recreate
the time has come
the time is now
to relive your past
~Lady Raven~
Author notes
This is another message I got while meditating and clearing my mind. The pic is that of the Goddess Bast. Ancient Egyptian Goddess.
Written July 23rd, 2005
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Wow, that was the most amazing comment. The way you discribed what you got out of the piece just amazed me to no end. And you are absolutely right on your thoughts as well.
Thanx so much for reading.
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
I like this poem a lot. I think I know what you mean by it, as well. Time has a way of obscuring moments and memories so that everything in the past becomes a tangled fog. I like the imagery you use to describe this phenomenon.
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This is really good!!! I love it!!!
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I knew YOU would love this pic and the poem. Thank you so much for stoping by. I am off to see the King Tut Exhibit on Aug. 22th. And I am also going to Santa Ana to see the exhibit on Ancient Egyptian Mummies. You should check it out. The mummie one is only $8. But the King Tut is a bit more.
Hugs and kisses,
Lady Raven -
Raven, you know i adore your work
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LMAO, thanx sweety. I am serious about us not exactly liking the same things. Your readers love your stuff and I am the one that had a hard time on some pieces and all my readers love my stuff and you find it hard to get into them. But I like you, and no, never pussy-foot around with my stuff. If ya don't like it, just wasn't your cup 'o tea. No biggy.
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven
PS: and like I said, some of this stuff comes as messages. Spirit Guides and Higher self don't think in rhyme.
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I don't really see why you think your style and mine are similar...I have yet to read a poem by you that rhymes at all...and I rhyme often..this one was much better than the last..atleast it had good spelling...keep writing ~Rush
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Background....picture.....words....combined perfectly into a tightly awesome package.
Great piece.
Thank you for sharing.
Rodney -
Very beautiful and your poem is just awesome! Loved it! Stacey
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Lovely work done here! You've got me speechless. I don't know what else to say but.... Amazing!
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Fantastic!
Wow! This is a fantastic poem and the image compliments it greatly
The flow is wonderful and the woman is..wow, stunning. I loved the third stanza, just because of the...well, the feeling in it. The background is really cool as well! Wonderful!
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wow i love this!
~mandy~ -
love the poem, n the pic is perfect to fit the sandy theme you have. strange pic of Bast though! looks kinda manly for a woman, n der r no cats! oh well, i guess every1 has there own interpretation! great poem, wish i cud help to make what it means! u prob know though! keep up the inspiring stuff!
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Yup, I likee. Very nice write, in a style that I favor over all others (if it even has a true name). And love the background and pic. Egyptian dieties are quite interesting, I think.
Bestest wishes & other mushy, gushy stuff
~Meli~
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The picture the back ground and your words all came together as one and the power of it all kicked ass - your work is very inspiring and vibrant in just another brilliant rite for I'm not worthy of your intllegence..thank you for letting me read your work..
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This is exactly the kind of piece I adore!It flows like a river,the content is intelligent,it does not ramble in the slightest.Very,very well written!
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love the background ! fits perfewctly witht he poem!
your VampiressAngel
Di
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wow! wonderful work!
~Clara~ -
Mum! wow! this was superb!
fantastic piece!
well done as always
your VampiressAngel
Di
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