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our poem

love you sweetie
          I love you baby! More then the world..

i love you more than the stars
         
          I love you more then the sun and the sky..

i love you more than the sea

          I love you more then the highest mountains..

i love you more than the lowest valleys
         
          I love you more than the widest rivers..

my love for you is more numerous than every grain of sand

          My love for you stretches farther than the deepest reaches of space..

my love for you is unimaginable

          Baby.. likewise; not with a million words could I possibly show you

i love you baby
           
           I love you darling
                 
                  ~always and forever~

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Written July 23rd, 2005

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  • crimson stardust
    July 30, 2005
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    thank you so much!


  • jezz-aussi
    July 23, 2005
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    Oooh I like this it's so pretty! hehehe Isn't love the most beautiful thing on the face of the earth? ^^ More?

    Love and light,

    Jenna