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Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough

I walked down the road the other day,
and all of the sudden,
I got a craving for ice cream.

I ran down main street,
to Micky's Ice Cream Bar,
to be shocked by the large line out front.

I must have waited for twenty minutes at least,
then I wasn't craving ice cream anymore.

So I went on my way,
with no ice cream rolling down my tongue,
into my stomach;
even though Micky's has the best Chocolate Chip Cookie dough around.

At two o'clock in the sunny afternoon,
I went back to my house,
to just sit on my ass,
and watch MTV.

It was seven in the evening when the craving came back.
I ran out my door,
down the street again,
and back to Micky's,
for some wonderful ice cream.

The line was gone of course,
so I was the only one there.
Alone,
I walked up to the young girl at the counter,
and said,
"I want a double scoop Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough please."

I walked back home that night,
with my stomach empty,
because I had forgotten my money.

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Written July 23rd, 2005

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  • jhengmarzan
    April 11, 2006
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    nice writing process, i like the techniqiues you use to write this one.. well done