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Another Statistic

She cuts to live
she cuts to die
she cuts to breath
she cuts to cry

she cuts to love
she cuts to heal
she cuts to lie
she cuts to feel

she cuts to learn
she cuts to see
she cuts to hate
she cuts to be

she's just another cutter girl
another statistic to add
she never sees the light
never sees the life she could have had

She cuts to live
she cuts to die
but because of this
she'll be another teenage corpse tonight

Author notes

off the top of my head, i know its not good, but tell me whatcha think anyway. thanks!
Written July 23rd, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    October 8, 2005
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    Hey hang in there... thats all i can say cause ive had ppl try to comfort me and tell me that it gets better but u never know whats gunna happen so u really cant say that its gunna get better, u can only hope... thanks for reading and entering the contest... im glad u liked the poem... take care! ~kiersten~


  • take-it-away
    October 8, 2005
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    awesome

    whoa, that was pretty deep. I can relate to the just another statistic/teenage corpse part, proboly because i'm most likely going to end up as one at the rate i'm going.

  • bleedingarms
    July 26, 2005
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    thanks so much!

  • emptymind
    July 26, 2005
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    This is a really really good poem i love it! It's so sad.. But has so much other emotion in there as well! Well done..
    ~~*Kate*~~

  • bleedingarms
    July 24, 2005
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    why thank you! woot, i was ur first comment! hehe~take care~Kiersten~

  • bleedingarms
    July 24, 2005
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    thanks so much, makes me feel not so alone to know that you know how i feel, although i wish you didnt have to! i wish you all my best... take care ~kiersten~

  • living to die
    July 23, 2005
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    so sad, yet so beautiful


  • BabyLove
    July 23, 2005
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    wow this is really good i love it i feel like your are talkin about me... b/c ur right... i am just "another statistic" just another teenage gurl cutter


  • p.s. -i-luv-u-
    July 23, 2005
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    .........

    Sorry I forgot to applaud this so here is your applaud. Talk to you later. ~Kassie~

  • p.s. -i-luv-u-
    July 23, 2005
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    GREAT JOB> AMAZING OUTCOME

    This is absolutely amazing. I can relate to this poem like none other. I love it. I cut so it's like I can feel what you are writing. I just love it. You are such a great writer. I can't wait to go and read more of your work. Maybe you could check out some of my work. You MIGHT like it. I'm not making any promises. Talk to you later. XOXOXO Kassie P.S Hang in there

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