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Suicide's Bliss

If I had any energy
I'd take it out on myself
If I knew it was the last time I'd see you
I would have hugged you goodnight
You were so good to me
I didn't feel like dying
You were so right for me
I never thought you were lying
And every time we'd fight
We'd make up
But this time there's no time
And I can't believe I shoved you out the door
No time for losers
And now I defiantly can't breathe
Hate was our new love
But now the hate is replaced with misery
We'll be together now
My love
In our fiery tombs
Suicide's bliss.

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Just another one...I'm feeling inspired right now.
Written July 22nd, 2005

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  • Bones-Addict
    July 22, 2005
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    This was awesome. The point of it was great and it's very well understood. (oh and evanescence rox)