When I'm in my lover's arms,
I breathe in the scent of him.
He smells of light sweat,
and of Axe Body Spray.
His breath is warm,
and has a hint of Crest toothpaste,
from when he brushed this morning.
When I brush kisses down his body,
I smell the wonderful smell of soap;
though I don't know the brand.
His hair has the unmistakable aroma of Suave shampoo;
the strawberry kind.
His smooth face,
and his manly chin,
smell of shaving cream.
I like when he shaves.
The air is now filled with the scent I love so much.....
My man.
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Written July 22nd, 2005
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I loooove it!!! It's gorgeous especially the last line. It's so sweet. Keep up the good work.
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aww that poem is really good clara, is that about whats his name?
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Thank You for your nice words.
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Awwww! this is so sweet! I loved how you said the names of the brands of products because they all do have a certain smell. All of those smells combined are wonderful. Really great imagery. I almost smelled the strawberry shampoo.Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck to you! Keep up the good work!♥
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