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paying it backwards

exhale a tear
and i'll breathe it away

inhale a fear
and i'll fight it away

whisper a smile
and i'll travel miles to see

dream of a wish
and i will relieve

relive the beauty
... and i will be free

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Written July 22nd, 2005

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