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Run out of

every time i touch you,its like heaven, the warmth of you hands and the smoothness of you face like silk                                                                     every hug you gave was like a new present over and over again because of the kindness and sweetness in them it keep me safe inside.
                                                                        every look that we seared,there was something in them i always saw it, she never has ,it was love and the friendship that could never go away, the love that kept me going, that was the reason, i still love her, she never ran out of love and friendship, the love i give her can and well never run out. tell the day that i die, and after that
                i well never run out of love.

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Written July 22nd, 2005

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  • Vernal Bloom
    July 27, 2005
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    Afarin

    That sounds a great work,believe me!
    I like this part more:
    "i well never run out of love."
    Keep on writting.
    Masoomeh


  • Immortal Beloved
    July 27, 2005
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    okay it's good except for the setup of the poem but seriously who r u?


  • Comic Book Romance gold member
    July 27, 2005
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    wow this is really good!!!! great job!!