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Knight in Shining Armor

You are my knight in shining armor.
Please promise me you'll never leave.
I feel safe when I'm around you.
You're the one person that I need.

A whisper on the wind
Has written on it your name,
Spring and summer flowers;
You put them all to shame.

Noone makes me feel
The way you always do.
I have never felt
The way I do when I'm with you.

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Written July 22nd, 2005

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  • AtVaR
    August 7, 2005
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    Hmmmm......