perspective alters
time and space are jumbled
they lose their common meanings
boundaries blur
sensations are magnified
there are no words
they don't exist
we search for each other
through a blue jello sea
cold isn't just cold it's 3D
i understand what it's like
to be a newborn baby
experiencing everything
for the first time
my body is disconnected
from itself
thoughts float in and out
like palatable clouds
object permanence is different
everything is in separate galaxies
reality is fluid
silver liquid
fragmented world
inside and outside of me
the universe exists
literally in my head
expanding and swirling
as i breathe
Author notes
who says you can't write on pot?
other stoner poems:
allpoetry.com/poem/1116708
Written July 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- How you feel about drugs by 6-Ft-UnDeR.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
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this is good..you gave a good portrayal of doing drugs and how they take you away from yourself
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Very nice indeed... Thank you for entering, best of luck to you
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Very nice piece -Al
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i like it. i love the imagery and your diction. you wrote this while you were stoned?!? that's supa ku-y-e!
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nice! i like it, such a great read! why cant all poems be written while stoned?
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perfect
such great imagery!! I'll def. have to try to write the next time I am high. -
I really liked reading this poem. It really has a nice flow to it, which I like. The flow is really great in this piece also. It has great images. Keep up the excellent work.
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I like this poem a lot! Great job! Never stop writing And thanks for adding to my add line poem, it wouldn't have been as great without your contribution. :-D
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Hard to beat this pieces imagery and use there of,the smooth flow is gentle and easy on the eyes,well written!
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Well, don't know a thing about writing on pot, but this piece is definitely a trip. And whether it about love, or your preception of love on pot, or maybe just your preception of the world on pot... or ... who knows??? But it is definitely whacky. And, I liked the visuals, they were fun. The lines I took to best were:
~~we search for each other
through a blue jello sea
cold isn't just cold it's 3D~~
Just because those were my favorite images!!
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