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Insensitive

All my senseless tears
And childish dreams
Amount to nothing
Burn to nothing
Reality kills
Thoughtless hopes prevail
Pointless
It seems
We're here for nothing
Nothing real at least
Live life like you die tomorrow
They say
We can't
We already died today
False
Can't find the truth
If there ever was any
Cry
Because we're all human
Rendered useless
By malevolent fools
Death by your own hands
Is food for the masses
Feed them what they want
Give them what the crave
Go ahead and lie to me
Tell me that you pray
Say that you can help me
I feel like today is lost
It's a blank canvas
That no one intends to fill
Weathered and lifeless
Torn and frayed
Dead to the world
My hopes lie beyond the grave
Never to be fulfilled
Never thought of again
Because that's what they want
The empty soul returned.

Author notes

My first post in awhile. Just something i wrote, nothin special...
Written July 1st, 2005

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  • OurxBeginning
    July 22, 2005
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    I like it..great job over all.