the very first day i met you
something with us just clicked
its like we where ment to be
im glad i was the one you picked
it cant express how much i care
you turned my world around
you made me so much happier a side
of me i didnt know existed was found
you make the darkness and pain
fade and float away when you hold me
i dont ever want you to let me go
with out you i dont know what i would be
*chorus*
*your my reason to push on
your the smile on my face
your the only thing i think of
your full of charm and grace*
so sincere and full of life
always there to lend a hand
i love you with all of my heart
thats all i want you to understand
you mean the world to me
and you allow me to push on
your the one i want to be with
without you id be gone
but you have to know ill always
be here for you too
i care about you so much
and we can works things through
*chorus*
*your my reason to push on
your the smile on my face
your the only thing i think of
your full of charm and grace*
Author notes
Written July 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Only True Love by dying-rose.
300 points, ended August 16, 2005, 11 entries
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hey, this is really cool, i like the rhyming, ur getting loads better, even though u were really good before! Keep it up!
Craig! -
Ooooh a song? I wish I could hear the melody of it... I imagine it would totally rock. This is a beautiful love poem, I enjoyed it a lot.
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, and for your patience with me in judging (things have come up unexpectedly that are making sticking to my self-set schedule nearly impossible.)
Love and light,
Jenna -
Hey good job on this poem i really liked it im new at this ..so my poems arent very good...im 17 bout to be 18 sept 3rd and im from oklahoma but just wanted to say good job keep it up
Brittany
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