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She is

I never once thought wrong or poorly of her, she could do no wrong, even if she did. She is right even if she was wrong.She is always kind even if she isn't. She is always beautiful,even if she don't think it. She is prefect in my eyes and i always believe in her, ween no one else has and she is always number one in my life!

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Written July 22nd, 2005

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  • BattleOfBlood
    July 22, 2005
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    Its cute, but I have to admit naive. Maybe its the fact I'm not trusting towards people, but if you only see her as the greatest thing in the world that can do no wrong. Then well a lot of wrong could come from it, you need to see the flaws and the good points. And take them both as they come. Keep on writing.
    Blessed be,
    Lefay


  • twistedlighting84
    July 22, 2005
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    NICE JOB

    its very good but can i asked who "her/she" is

  • crazyone
    July 22, 2005
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    thats awesome

  • bgoodin
    July 22, 2005
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    great

    thanks and i like you pomes alot

  • OneLastBreathe
    July 22, 2005
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    Great!

    So touching. That is a very nice way to think about her. It truly is!

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