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Eternal Happiness

I look to the sky
Seeing the rolling clouds
The stars are shining bright
As bright as Heaven could allow

The crickets softly hum
The trees gently sway
I stop to think and ponder
On another closing day

I think to myself
What a wonderful gift this is
That he is mine
And I am his

We live together
Together as one
Two people in love
When all is said and done

We’ll live in love
True harmony
Forever and always
We will always be

Happy in eternity
Him and me



Author notes

Hey all!! I wrote this on my way home...It was really pretty out and of course all that first part was going on, so I thought of this and here it is....Sorry this is my first poem in a long, long time....but i'm been writing in my latest novel called Dreams. So yeah...lol!! Gotta go...Love ya! Muah! Byes! Always, Sam
Written July 21st, 2005

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  • shooting star533
    July 21, 2005
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    I enjoyed this poem alot. It had great flow and was so sweet. I especially enjoyed the beginning verses. so emotional and well described. well good luck with your novel and best wishes-shooter.