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Black mist of the new moon

Never have I forgotten the pain you caused,
Never will I forget your adultery,
If you think I don't remember the Black mist that night of the new moon your wrong,
It's burned into the back of my mind always their to remind me of myself,
and how I'm apart of you,
For you I'm always your least favored son,
Pushed aside and forgotten by the success of the older two,
I fucking hate you.

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Written July 21st, 2005

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  • Proxy
    October 2, 2005
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    I really like the "black mist that night of the new moon" line...I think it's a beautiful idea. But what an upsetting piece to contain that beauty. I miss you!

    Love, Amy

  • fallenangel76667
    July 25, 2005
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    wow.....im sry to hear that i know how it feels when parents pick favorites

  • Crazy Person
    July 21, 2005
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    ...... >.< sry man, life is like that to all of us.. i wish it wasnt for u, but this is a good poem ^.^