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Fallen for a Gentle Giant

With each breathe you take,
I have Fallen deeper into
the hole.

With each touch from you,
My heart has Fallen deeper
into my soul.

I thank God everyday for
allowing our paths to cross
this way.

You are the  Gentle Giant in
my dreams.

You are the caring person just
for me.

You are the provider that I
need.

You are the Gentle Giant that
everyone sees.

Yvonne Griffin
12/22/02

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this is a very delicate issue for me.
Written December 22nd, 2002

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  • Roseleaf
    December 25, 2002
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    excellent

    yes do agree with ya Lady but it is good
    that there is a Gentle Giant around
    just when you need one
    God is good
    Wish you much happiness
    Just remember your quote :D
    don't get hooked unless
    You want the Bait :D
    Cheers pauline xox
    Keep us posted
    send me one :D


  • Rubee
    December 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    'With each touch from you,
    My heart has Fallen deeper
    into my soul'
    such beautiful, heart-felt words...beautifully written Yvonne!!! :)


  • AngelEyes323
    December 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I agree, this is 'delicately' beautiful. Wonderful poem.
    ~Kathy


  • bonnie blue
    December 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i know it's a delicate issue...but you have gained much, indeed...that much is very clear:)

    *hugs*
    bonnie


  • myrataal silver member
    December 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Oh, and that is the word to describe this artwork: delicately beautiful! I just LOVED this, Yvonne! Hugs, Myra

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