I loved you so much but I got to be strong
I got to have faith, I want to hold on
I often think of our past, the things we did
The fun we had, the emotions we hid
We had our ups and downs, like most relationships do
but somehow ours was too much, for us to pull through
People ask why we broke up, I really don't know what to say
There was just so many things wrong on any given day
I hurt because I lost you or was it because it was you that hurt me
So I replay our love over and over again, hoping to find something I didnt before see
Instead of finding the reason on why we ended
I just find more pain of the things I miss
Time has made things easier, but my heart never mended
I still remember the feel of your kiss
The way you held me when I got scared
Or wiped away my tears
The way you stood by me when no one else cared
and pushed away all of my fears
How you were my counselor, my protector, my motivator to succeed
All these things I miss that my heart cries out for in need
My emotions torn up, split in two
part of them rekindling my love for you
the other part crying out in pain
the one who was to love me, protecting me from all
leaving an ocean of tears falling like rain
you hurt me the most, leaving me to fall
I love you, I hate you
You hurt me, You loved me
I don't know what to think
All I know is I want a way to hold on, be strong
Have hope for a better day, be the girl I was with you
even if you are no longer there
I want to prove to myself I can pull through
Ignoring that I still care
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Written July 21st, 2005
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Brilliant
Awwww...this is an awesome piece...brillinat writing..i am a fan of u...this is not a poem, but a song from ur broken heart.
i just loved it. it was very complete, and one of the best painful poems i have ever read..
i just can't imagine why this write has not got many applauds...u have beautifully described the split emotions that u experience...ur pain and ur suffering in getting over it is beautifully expressed in ur poem.
the rhyming is good and seems unintentional.
ur attempts to overcome your loss are well shown in the end.
some very good exhibition of sad poetry.
a very well written poem.
Great write.
Parth.
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I liked the length of this poem, and the way you chose to end it..those last two lines ring in your head, echoing the emotions.
I love these two lines too...:
"We had our ups and downs, like most relationships do
but somehow ours was too much, for us to pull through "
So true. It happens with the best, strongest, and cutest couples. Perfect has its faults. I dont think anyone would WANT perfect though, thats why things fall apart. Just saying. lol. ANyways. I liked the rhyming you started with. Its unusual to see the rhyming switch like it did in this poem. I didnt like the way you did it, because it leaves you thinking that the first rhyming pattern was too much to handle, so you switched for conveniency. 
I dont know..maybe Im making this up. lol. anyways, good luck and nice write! 
best wishes
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hey. Thanx for entering my contst!
this was a long and full poem. exactly what i was looking for. thank you so much. your like the 3rd person who has done that. i liked the ryhming. very nice. there was a lot of emotion in this. another thing i like. each sentence was long and full. i really liked this one. i can feel what your feeling. please keep up the great work. your a good writer. thank you for sharing this poem. im out l8erz
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